Azure Jane Lunatic (azurelunatic) wrote,
Azure Jane Lunatic

Writing group notes!

Tenses & clunkphrase:
shined = shone.
may = might.
"stood to her feet" = got to her feet, stood.

What is the material that those houses are made of, the real name of it? The photographer would know. The photographer would also probably think about the composition that the houses made before the colors, then notice them.

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